Fire Water

Fire water fuels waiting demons

waiting for release,waiting to attack

and deny, deny you sanity

love and companionship

dredging anger, venom from

all the places where you shove it

Cramming vile & grotesque thoughts

fermented perfectly with that one last beer..

6 thoughts on “Fire Water

  1. I am back to your blog! I can’t help it. I just can’t stay away from it. It is so hypnotizing.. not in the cryptic sense but in a good way.
    This poem is so raw, you know? It is what it is. No ornaments. It’s the truth. It was what your mind and your soul were carrying together. I love that.
    Remember me.
    I’ll be back to comment more.


    • Thank you so much, I am glad you are back. I should be back at full speed by next week. A lot of my poetry is raw I am told and it makes sense. I write poetry often when a line or thought won’t leave my mind. The rest of the poem comes pouring out once I get the first line out. I try to go back later to polish it, but still keep it simple and true.


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